Comic 74 - Page5

Posted on 21st Dec 2013, 4:01 PM in Chapter 4
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MassDet 21st Dec 2013, 4:01 PM edit delete
MassDet
A long long time ago when Syn crashed through the tree CyberSkull pointed out that she only has superficial damage. I would like to make it clear that is not the case here...geez I feel like a mad scientist.

Happy holidays everyone. I hope everyone ends the year great and begins the next even greater.

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cattservant 21st Dec 2013, 4:52 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
Well Really!
CyberSkull 21st Dec 2013, 8:33 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
That looks decidedly more solid than a tree.
jamie59 22nd Dec 2013, 2:37 AM edit delete reply
jamie59
Syn you were healing up so nicely now you'll have to start over.
Grey Garou 22nd Dec 2013, 3:13 AM edit delete reply
Grey Garou
Now this is interesting. Testing Syn's physical limits as to how resistant her body is to damage. Maybe even get into her regenerative ablities, maybe even perhaps some hidden technology left over from her arrival?

With respect, I'm afraid I don't find the event of Syn being attacked conveyed too well in the last panel. Her arms jumping up is good, but the big guy almost looks like he's sitting on her. I assume that under the characters is supposed to be text effect? If it is, it's a bit hard to read for me.

Perhaps some speed lines might help, radial speed line from point of impact, or expressing the arms flying down. The pose can be improved upon significantly from a variety of angles. Maybe a side panel showing Syn's face at impact, or even cracks in the stone floor radiating from the point of impact. Just observations and suggestions
MassDet 5th Jan 2014, 11:47 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
Ya now that you mention it, the page does seem kinda flat. Ill experiment with a few things and see if I can't get something to work. I wanted to do a motion blur, but it just made the dudes arms look muddy. Thank's for the crit. I appreciate them.
zenla 24th Dec 2013, 5:07 PM edit delete reply
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