Comic 69 - Chapter4Title

Posted on 12th Oct 2013, 7:14 PM in Chapter 4
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MassDet 12th Oct 2013, 7:14 PM edit delete
MassDet
Since it's just the title page I figured I wouldn't wait two whole weeks to post it. I'm going to be honest...I am really pleased with the way this page turned out. Also I realize after a couple of the comments that you guys are wondering why so much attention is being payed to other characters besides Syn. Well I kinda intended this to be a classic fantasy fellowship/group type of adventure. Each character has an important part to play in this story arc, not the least Aliah. Also as far as Syn coming to terms with her new personality/programming choices...that issues will addressed. Lets just say several characters are going to have major changes by the end of this story arc. Picture it as we are nearing the end of the season and really big things are going to be happening. No more trips to the library for awhile. Hope that helps. I realize with the pacing of a biweekly webcomic that it seems strange, and I will keep that in mind in the future.

Comments:

cattservant 12th Oct 2013, 9:28 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
Aliah gets right to the point
And a little edgy too!
jamie59 13th Oct 2013, 12:12 AM edit delete reply
jamie59
Hate to see her with PMS.
Guest 17th Oct 2013, 12:57 AM edit delete reply
I would rather my comic not deal with PMS...it's too scary a concept in reality to include in a comic haha.
Grey Garou 16th Oct 2013, 11:07 PM edit delete reply
Grey Garou
I guess I was just kind of surprised that Syn felt to me like she was becoming just another character. Maybe my style of writing is old-fashioned, I found Syn by far the most interesting thing of Rouge Pro. I certainly dig that you need to establish other characters to lay the foundation for more writing potential. I don't think you're doing it wrong, I suppose I just want to see some cool Terminator-style sexbot action.
MassDet 16th Oct 2013, 11:45 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
Oh then you should stick around...issue four is going to be where you see cool terminator style sexbot action. Well a clarification...ex-sexbot. In all seriousness thank you for the feedback Grey. Your comments make me think, and yeah the pacing and focus could have been better so far. I will have to learn from that in the future.