Comic 63 - Page17

Posted on 27th Jul 2013, 7:28 PM in Chapter Three
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MassDet 27th Jul 2013, 7:28 PM edit delete
MassDet
So you may have noticed some changes to the website. Ive been practicing my strengthening my pathetic web design abilities. The “About” page is getting some serious rework. There will be a good character bio section and an interactive map when it is all done.

So let me know what you think. Like with the comic page, if something is stupid or sucks or you think it should be redone let me know. Im always open to feedback.

Comments:

cattservant 27th Jul 2013, 8:26 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
Tactics as a virtue!

[A little feedback:
Change the color (like black) of your 'control words'. It took a long time* to find the 'Post a Comment' location!]


*(Of course, I'm dedicated!)
MassDet 27th Jul 2013, 10:46 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
Ah see that was my plan...demand comments and then make it frustrating to do so.

Actually that is part of my sad html/css skills...I know those colors need to be fixed. Im still trying to figure that out. There is a lot of cussing involved in the process.
CyberSkull 27th Jul 2013, 10:31 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
I am hoping the "better idea" involves accelerated plasma.
cattservant 27th Jul 2013, 11:18 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
All in all it's just another hole in the wall!
CyberSkull 28th Jul 2013, 3:30 AM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
I was thinking more along the lines of burning them with fire so hot it ignites the stones of the dungeon.
cattservant 28th Jul 2013, 3:41 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
Well, one of our Intrepid Trio still needs to breathe...
CyberSkull 28th Jul 2013, 6:02 AM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
I would argue only 1 of them does.
cattservant 28th Jul 2013, 6:09 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
Agreed.
Grey Garou 28th Jul 2013, 3:35 AM edit delete reply
Grey Garou
I am a bit struck by how different Syn looks in panel four vs. panel six. I actually thought they were different people at first.

This battle is being fought underground in a tomb of sorts, right? It might work better to make the background ambient lighting a touch darker, to give the room a more sinister feel and to hide the number of undead warriors a bit better. The unknown helps to instill fear in a situation. I think it might also help the overall contrast and make the special effects from the magic stand out more. These are observations and opinions only.
MassDet 30th Jul 2013, 4:44 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
I think you are right. So I edited the page making the background darker. I also adjusted Syn's faces in the two panels. I think her lips were too big in one and too small in the other. Not sure how much better it is but I gave it a try.

I still need to fix the magic effects a few pages back...Rogue Programming is a lot of work.
Zenla 28th Jul 2013, 4:59 PM edit delete reply
well website is just a tool
to which you upload comic.
Personally as long as I don t have too
scroll rigt/left to see comic I am happy
On the isde note Syn shows the marking of hero.Doing unexpected