Comic 39 - Page17

Posted on 15th Sep 2012, 5:19 AM in Chapter Two
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MassDet 15th Sep 2012, 5:19 AM edit delete
MassDet
Another page up! It seems they have gotten a handle on the green assassin finally. Issue two is winding down and I have been working hard on Issue three. I promise with issue three more fights…bigger swords…and backgrounds! I guess that’s the idea right? Always show improvement.

Comments:

dpallee 15th Sep 2012, 5:25 AM edit delete reply
dpallee
Great work, excellent color....keep it up
Zenla 15th Sep 2012, 10:02 AM edit delete reply
Don t tell me we will have Gutts from berserker as guest comic?!
Centcomm 15th Sep 2012, 6:23 PM edit delete reply
Centcomm
:D this is a great page ! hehe recalc the math XD
Grey Garou 15th Sep 2012, 11:07 PM edit delete reply
Grey Garou
Ah, excellent. The lighter backgrounds and the extra detail as well really highlight your characters better. But still, for nighttime scenes those darker backgrounds would work. The emphasis in the third panel with the red lettering helps the mood. I really don't mean to be a jerk, but those thick panel borders still to me distract a bit. Sometimes they seem to connect to the inking of the panel itself. But again, that could be just me.
MassDet 16th Sep 2012, 12:49 AM edit delete reply
MassDet
Naw you're not being a jerk. I appreciate criticism, I want Rogue Programming to be as good as it can get. After you first brought it up I did start making the frame borders thinner on the pages I was working on. However by then I was already working on issue 3, so the rest of issue to will still have those thick borders.

By all means keep the crits coming. A lot of the stuff you guys have brought up I would never have noticed if someone had not commented on it.
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 19th Oct 2012, 12:05 AM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
This page is so sexy.