Comic 38 - Page16

Posted on 31st Aug 2012, 4:06 PM in Chapter Two
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MassDet 31st Aug 2012, 4:06 PM edit delete
MassDet
I tried to get a bit more creative with my page layout with this page. I also wanted to touch on the fact that Syn is having a bit of an inner struggle with who she is and how she fits in. Of course in the end she will always kick ass.

Hope you enjoy. Thank you again for all the comments these pages have been getting.

Comments:

dougwarner59 31st Aug 2012, 4:18 PM edit delete reply
dougwarner59
Love the action going on here. I also noticed you are still doing the missing background shots. I decided to start limiting my background, I can cut my drawing time in half. I still can't get myself to remove all backgrounds, because I don't have the skill you have to pull it off.
Grey Garou 31st Aug 2012, 6:58 PM edit delete reply
Grey Garou
It's good to see that you're adding flavor to your page layout, but just one thing has bugged me over the last few pages. The dark monotone backgrounds tend to dull the contrast in your art and take away from the inking a bit. The characters don't jump out of the page as much as they could. Unless you're trying to recreate a night scene, then that effect would fit it.
MassDet 1st Sep 2012, 2:55 AM edit delete reply
MassDet
I agree with ya Grey. I resolved with the next issue to have backgrounds, but it is a trade off. Those pages defiantly take a lot longer to finish. I think I will reserve the right to redo these pages as well and put the backgrounds in them when I get the time. Thanks for the comment.
cattservant 31st Aug 2012, 7:29 PM edit delete reply
cattservant
When it's in doubt knock it down, and then,
If it gets back up knock it down again!