Comic 37 - Page15

Posted on 14th Aug 2012, 11:50 PM in Chapter Two
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MassDet 14th Aug 2012, 11:50 PM edit delete
MassDet
Crap! Late again…this never happens I swear.
Anyway, I actually reworked the first frame and liked it better but am still not real happy with it. This will be one I reserve the right to make changes to later, as soon as I figure out what I need to do. Any input you guys might have would be appreciated.
Thanks again for stopping by, keep the comments coming.

UPDATE: Okay so I reworked the top frame. I do like this one better. I feel like George Lucas though.

Comments:

cattservant 15th Aug 2012, 1:08 AM edit delete reply
cattservant
On to Plan B then...
zenla 15th Aug 2012, 5:06 PM edit delete reply
Ah well one should not show all his cards at once. Nice program talk
zenla 16th Aug 2012, 7:05 PM edit delete reply
Judging from lack of comments since update I would say they will show up on saturday maybe sunday. Kinda sad they don t check more often. But oh well we all have life
Guest 17th Aug 2012, 5:12 AM edit delete reply
It's all good. Life has been pretty busy for me too, hence the lateness of the last few pages.
Gillsing 19th Aug 2012, 7:10 PM edit delete reply
I think someone might have stolen our time. Could it be aliens? Or is it just the temperature and/or the season?

As for feedback on the first panel, I think Syn's head seems to be lacking the back/top of her skull. And perhaps her chin is jutting out a bit too much? That's usually an "old people" thing.

And I was surprised to see Syn right next to Mhila. I thought Syn would be busy keeping the assassin from "taking care" of Mhila, and Mhila would therefore have to instruct Syn from a safe distance.
MassDet 21st Aug 2012, 11:59 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
Thanks for the feedback. I am thinking when I get some time Ill rework that whole top frame and make it all better.
Gillsing 28th Aug 2012, 1:33 PM edit delete reply
Ah, all my issues with the previous first panel vanished in a puff of hard work. Thumbs up! :-)
Kermit 21st Aug 2012, 9:15 PM edit delete reply
So what kind of programming language is Syn using? I've never seen an anonymous type parameter massed into a method call.
MassDet 21st Aug 2012, 11:58 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
I just finished an intro programming class so Im trying to make it make sense and still look like programming. Hopefully as I take more classes Ill get better at it.
Kermit 22nd Aug 2012, 12:29 AM edit delete reply
Makes sense to me. IMO, it's a good thing that you didn't exactly mimic the syntax of an existing programming language, since she's not the product of our civilization.
MassDet 23rd Aug 2012, 12:25 PM edit delete reply
MassDet
Thanks!
CyberSkull 25th Aug 2012, 2:13 PM edit delete reply
CyberSkull
The next tactical pack Syn installs should have a faster than real-time subconscious re-evaluation module. ;)

Sure, it would probably be a big CPU burden until she optimizes it, but it would really save her synthbacon in situations like this!
Caley Tibbittz Collopy 18th Oct 2012, 11:51 PM edit delete reply
Caley Tibbittz Collopy
Really clear, well-realized action.

I'm picking up from where I left off, so I forget the locale. The endless blue seems a bit empty; perhaps a piece or two of background sticking into the frame would help ground pages like this.

Oh, and panel 1 looks fine. I wouldn't worry.